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Wild lilies roaming through the meadows
But of course; they can't hold a candle to her pretty face
Her smoldering green eyes... oh, how I miss her so;
But she's not here; no, she's floating through empty, empty space

I wish I could take that word back
when I saw her running, crying, away from me;
I wish to hold and caress her again
There was a chance of she and I being a "we".

I knew there was a chance, I could feel it in my heart
I knew she loved me; it wasn't impossible
But no; she chose "him", and now they're both dead
Now that chance is completely implausible

That's where you see me now
crying on the lilies,
crying for her;
so leave me (and her) alone, please

Leave me alone with my Lily.
I made this poem after finishing Order of the Phoenix (R.I.P. Sirius D: ). I was thinking about how Lily had defended Severus before he called her a Mudblood.

I was being emo while listening to the radio and reading sad Snape/Lily short stories. This was the product. I hope you enjoy it. =) Don't hate, appreciate.

COPYRIGHT: me. DO NOT TAKE MY POEM! Unless you ask first~!
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Yo-Snap Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice tone! I like it!
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HP-Superfan1998 Aug 19, 2013  Student Writer
Aww thank you~ I wrote that a long time ago though. X3
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Yo-Snap Aug 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like to go way back in people's galleries! X)
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HP-Superfan1998 Aug 20, 2013  Student Writer
Ah.. Welp, my poetry has certainly improved since them. :3 But it's been a while since I've uploaded anything.
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Yo-Snap Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Understandable. And believe me when I say that school's gonna get even more in the way. But, of course, the first two years of IB aren't TOO bad. :shrug:
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HP-Superfan1998 Aug 20, 2013  Student Writer
I'm actually really positive about the whole IB thing. I've been in the advanced classes all my life so in terms of having higher-level academics, this is nothing new.
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Yo-Snap Aug 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sure you'll do fine. :)
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HP-Superfan1998 Aug 20, 2013  Student Writer
Haha thanks! :D
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SaramicaW508 May 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Deep, touching and very beautiful...
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HP-Superfan1998 May 2, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks soooo much! :) It means a lot to me that you like it.
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