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Wild lilies roaming through the meadows
But of course; they can't hold a candle to her pretty face
Her smoldering green eyes... oh, how I miss her so;
But she's not here; no, she's floating through empty, empty space

I wish I could take that word back
when I saw her running, crying, away from me;
I wish to hold and caress her again
There was a chance of she and I being a "we".

I knew there was a chance, I could feel it in my heart
I knew she loved me; it wasn't impossible
But no; she chose "him", and now they're both dead
Now that chance is completely implausible

That's where you see me now
crying on the lilies,
crying for her;
so leave me (and her) alone, please

Leave me alone with my Lily.
I made this poem after finishing Order of the Phoenix (R.I.P. Sirius D: ). I was thinking about how Lily had defended Severus before he called her a Mudblood.

I was being emo while listening to the radio and reading sad Snape/Lily short stories. This was the product. I hope you enjoy it. =) Don't hate, appreciate.

COPYRIGHT: me. DO NOT TAKE MY POEM! Unless you ask first~!
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Yo-Snap Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Nice tone! I like it!
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HP-Superfan1998 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Writer
Aww thank you~ I wrote that a long time ago though. X3
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Yo-Snap Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student General Artist
I like to go way back in people's galleries! X)
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HP-Superfan1998 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Writer
Ah.. Welp, my poetry has certainly improved since them. :3 But it's been a while since I've uploaded anything.
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Yo-Snap Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Understandable. And believe me when I say that school's gonna get even more in the way. But, of course, the first two years of IB aren't TOO bad. :shrug:
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HP-Superfan1998 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Writer
I'm actually really positive about the whole IB thing. I've been in the advanced classes all my life so in terms of having higher-level academics, this is nothing new.
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Yo-Snap Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm sure you'll do fine. :)
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HP-Superfan1998 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student Writer
Haha thanks! :D
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SaramicaW508 Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Student General Artist
Deep, touching and very beautiful...
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HP-Superfan1998 Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks soooo much! :) It means a lot to me that you like it.
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